Wednesday, March 12, 2014

Moving In-- FLASH

She was unpacking one of the multitudes of her boxes she brought over from her last apartment.  He walked in with more boxes of stuff. Looking around he sees that she separated the boxes, his and hers, and put them on opposite sides of the room. He puts his box down and asked her what happened. She organized it. To him, it looked more like segregation but he kept his mouth shut.  Opening the newest box he brought in, he pulls out a photograph.  When he shows it to her she says it was from their vacation last spring break then she turns away.  He looks at it one more time, remembering how happy they were then puts the photo on the table in the center of the room and turns back to his side as well.


This is a flash from a play that I am writing. I had to turn it into more of a novel feel instead of the regular play format.

3 comments:

  1. I can't figure out why these two are together! But I suppose that is part of the play's appeal. It makes me want to figure out more about these two. Why didn't he seem happy to see the photo now? Stuff like that.

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    1. I would explain....but you'll have to wait to read the actual play <3

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  2. I really like it! The flow was awesome and the added element of a mystery made it very appealing! :)

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